The Painting

By Julia Kemp

A swift, delicate hand paints a portrait near a gurgling stream

Smooth cream paint glides along the canvas fibers

Paint takes color, color takes shape

A woman in the water lays along the frame

The painter pauses, admires his work

Grins and looks around

Wide-eyed patience

Waiting for praise

Beautiful!

Cried a little girl

Playing on a grass patch

Muddy skirt and messy hair

Her arms are too big!

Cried her mother

Pursed lips

Legs crossed in pompous poise

Maybe her arms do look weird

Thought the painter

He swipes his thumb along her shoulders

Rubs at her elbows until the canvas stretches

Adds paint 

And more paint

And more paint

Until the woman’s arms lay flat and awkward

Carefully hidden behind her waist

The painter pauses, admires his work

Grins and looks around

Wide-eyed patience

Waiting for praise

Wonderful!

Cried a little boy

Tossing a red ball across the ebbing shore

Gleeful smile and blistered knees

Her eyes are too bright!

Cried his brother

Hand on shoulder

Leather shoes digging into the dirt

Maybe her eyes do look weird

Thought the painter

He dabs her irises with a damp cloth

Scrapes her eyebrows until the canvas nearly tears

Adds paint

And more paint

And more paint

Until the woman’s eyes are gray and faded

Meticulously hidden behind her sunhat

The painter takes a step back

But doesn’t like the painting anymore

Her hands are too big

Her lips are all wrong

Her hair is too flat

He rips open the canvas

Wipes off the paint

Places the frame in a trash bag

And starts on a new one

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